Comments for Writing with Chaos

Comment on Writing with Chaos has moved! by Caitlin's Concepts

Caitlin's Concepts — Wed, 06 Jul 2011 03:14:55 +0000

Noted and subscribed! Again. =P

Comment on Fragments of France by Anastasia

Anastasia — Sat, 02 Jul 2011 07:47:08 +0000

I love how you wrote it so we feel like it’s a memory too. Hazy.

Comment on The Appointment by KG Waite

KG Waite — Sat, 02 Jul 2011 01:45:35 +0000

Frustrating yet a terrific read. I, too, struggle with the blogging/prompts/novel/raising kids issues. There is so much involved in this, I wonder whether I should just focus on one aspect of my writing.

Comment on The Appointment by Ilana

Ilana — Sat, 02 Jul 2011 00:11:02 +0000

So glad I’m back in the #TRDC loop- I get to read more about John and Mav! So much history there. Love the idea of finding the card years later and how that impacts the relationship. And Mav letting go the guilt was really well done.

Comment on The Appointment by Andrea

Andrea — Sat, 02 Jul 2011 00:03:54 +0000

I kind of want to cry here. I just went to the beginning and read all of it. I love that you have it all together and I kind of want to do that, as well. Add a page, maybe, just to include my story and characters. I get what you’re saying – but I am proud of you for creating your own entries to their story without the prompts, and I think you can totally DO it. You already have. But I also think it’s kind of cool to use the prompts, as well, when they do fit, so you need to do what works for you! Great story. My heart and stomach wrenched throughout much of it. I love them. Even when I want to kick his ass and I’m really pissed that she took a drink at all (but can understand why she did). Great work!

Comment on The Appointment by Ashley

Ashley — Fri, 01 Jul 2011 23:51:17 +0000

I hope you stick it out with them. There’s still so much to discover and learn. It seems as though, even though they’ve already experienced so much, that they’re just beginning. Plus I want some more answers! Lol. It’s been a very captivating story.

Comment on The Appointment by mypajamadays

mypajamadays — Fri, 01 Jul 2011 23:32:21 +0000

I am in awe of how you are able to keep these characters going, especially with the word limit. There is so much raw emotion and information in every post. Dialogue is definitely one of your strengths and gives them a true voice.

Comment on The Appointment by CDG

CDG — Fri, 01 Jul 2011 19:25:26 +0000

Oh, misunderstandings, pride, and impetuous youth.

I love that were seeing their past a little better fleshed out, and if this is the end for a while, best of luck with the WIP!

Comment on The Appointment by TheKirCorner

TheKirCorner — Fri, 01 Jul 2011 18:09:55 +0000

I love your dialouge, it’s so real and Vivid.

I thought she might miscarry, only because her being a single mom at this jucture wasn’t going to work, or her giving up a baby for adoption would confuse us (me) .

It was excellent, it flowed and ebbed, it sounded as it was happening and that’s the point.
Lovin the story.

Comment on Drawing Blood by TheKirCorner

TheKirCorner — Fri, 01 Jul 2011 18:03:45 +0000

wow, wow, wow,…….now that’s a STORY!!!!